The more I re-read, the more holes I see. Everything's a bit too simplistic, isn't it?
The Legend of Spyri and Gympi - Part 2
“Hey boy!” one of the soldiers yelled at the boy, struggling toward the washing line with a basket piled with washing.
“Yes?” the boy asked, putting down the heavy load with a sigh of relief under the line.
“Not ‘yes?’ you ignorant little brat! It’s ‘yes sir’!” the soldier stumped over, kicking the boy down and causing him to knock over the large basin of washed clothes.
“Yes sir?” the boy asked, struggling up right.
“Now look what you’ve done, you oaf!” the soldier yelled, slapping the boy in the face. “Go and redo the washing again. If my shirt’s not clean and dry by tomorrow, you know what you’ll get!”
“Yes sir,” the boy said glumly, rubbing his wrinkled fingers on his scarred face while picking up the fallen clothes.
“Once you’ve finished doing that, I want you to run down to the artillery tents and call Leanders. So be quick about it.”
“Yes sir.”
The boy rinsed and hung up the clothes as quickly as he could, not wanting to get into trouble with the big soldier, Albert, again. Then he ran to find Leanders.
The boy had been living with the soldiers for a month now, in the main camp at the border between the two warring countries. The enemy had invaded his country very quickly and taken over his town, whichever one it was, just days after the official declaration of war had been given. These soldiers had found him wandering aimlessly about, having lost all former memory and had enlisted his help as their general camp servant. As far as they knew, he had no name and did not need one. One yell of ‘Boy!’ was enough and he’d come running. He cooked and cleaned for them; sometimes even polished their gear, though not when the officers were about.
This camp was known to the soldiers as Heckler Camp, where the soldiers after being on leave were sent to recuperate in the township of Herrick and get fit again before heading back out to the war front. Heckler Camp was just 30 minutes drive from Thistlowood. The 5th Company were marching out to relieve their comrades at the frontlines in two days and the boy would be going with them.
The soldiers of 5th Company quite liked their boy. He was quiet, didn’t cry when he was hit and did as he was told with alacrity. He could tell good stories, but he never smiled. He wasn’t supposed to be coming with them, but they had decided that they would smuggle him as far as they could. For some of the men, he reminded them of their sons back home.
Captain Isenskowl turned to see a shadow slip off into the dark. He dashed out of his tent with a shout, but could see nobody about. He was sure there was a boy in the camp, who moved silently and like the wind. He had only ever seen this boy’s shadow, and was sure that he must be a spy for the enemy. All the men he questioned always denied ever seeing a boy about.
In Thistlowood, a tall, well built boy with roughly cut hair was busy trying to find enough food for all the children he had managed to save. They never saw him; neither did he want them to. He was ashamed of himself and there was nobody to tell him that he needn’t be. These children were mostly war orphans that he’d saved from their burning houses and taken to the caves in the hills. Most of them were his former classmates and schoolmates.
The children of the caves knew they had a benefactor who was trying to take care of them. Besides the food they foraged for themselves in the town, their benefactor often left them presents of food, clothes, blankets or toys. They had plenty of water, for there was a stream running nearby.
Most of the presents he left them were from the enemy and had the enemy’s marks branded on them. Two days ago, he had left them a basket full of Spyri branded clothes. Since that day, the children all decided that they would call their mysterious friend, whether he was an enemy or not, Spyri.
From a distance, the boy always watched and helped Spyri, although Spyri didn’t know it. The boy travelled large distances during the night quickly and could move as silently as Spyri. He often visited this town during the night and sometimes during the day, when he thought that the soldiers at Heckler’s Camp would not miss him. There was something about this town that drew him although he didn’t know why. He had seen all the children that Spyri had saved and knew where they all hid. He watched all the goings on in town and his eyes and ears missed nothing, but he kept all the town’s secrets to himself.
It was getting late. The sun would be coming back up soon. The boy ran back to the camp to get a few hours rest before being kicked awake by a soldier.
“Hey Boy, get up!” Albert whispered harshly. “We have to hide you in the truck before the Captain comes. Hurry!”
“Already?” the boy asked sleepily.
“The top brass decided that they need us quickly, so we’re being sent a day early.”
“Oh.”
“Here,” Albert said, lifting a tarpaulin. “Hide under here in all that stuff.”
The boy climbed under the tarpaulin and uncomfortably nestled himself amidst the coiled wires.”
“I’ll call you when we get there. We’ll be moving in an hour’s time. Be still or you’ll get found.”
Albert’s footsteps faded away and the boy drifted back into a dreamless sleep. The truck’s engine and jolting woke him up.
The boy lay still a moment, wondering where he was. Then he remembered. They were off, going to a place called Murnabeem at the war’s front. After a lot of jolting around, he fell asleep again. The air was warm and stuffy.
He woke up and fell asleep countless times during the journey. Eventually they arrived at Murnabeem, where gunshots and artillery guns boomed like a never ending thunderstorm.
“Boy! Boy! You can come out now. We’re there!” Albert opened the tarpaulin.
The boy crawled out and fell out of the truck. His legs had been cramped during the journey and weren’t working properly.
He heard footsteps and looked up at Albert. “Someone’s coming.”
“Albert!”
Albert came to attention before Captain Isenskowl.
“Who is this boy and what is he doing here?”
“A stowaway found aboard this truck, sir!” Albert answered. “He was hiding under that tarpaulin amidst the wires, sir!”
“Go check the wires and make sure they are all still in shape, then bring them into that classroom over there.”
“Yes sir!”
It seemed that the 5th Company would be spending the night in Murnabeem High School.
“Now you boy, stand up!”
The boy stood up shakily and looked into Captain Isenskowl’s gun point expectantly.
“Who are you and what are you doing here?”
“Sir?”
“Don’t ‘sir’ me, you dirty little spy! I can’t believe your government has stooped so low as to use boys like you as spies.”
“I’m not a spy, sir,” the boy replied, seeing Albert’s glare. “I don’t know why I got onto the truck. I think I was play-acting at being a soldier and woke up and found myself here, with that soldier there yelling at me.”
“I see,” Captain Isenskowl scowled at the boy, stroking his small bearded chin.
“I could help with general things about the camp,” the boy offered tremblingly. “Like cleaning or cooking or medical aid or…”
He quailed as he looked at the gun again.
“Or?” Captain Isenskowl repeated menacingly.
“Or you could kill me if you really want, though it won’t be a very nice thing to have on your conscience… sir,” the boy added as an afterthought.
“You are a very brave boy,” Captain Isenskowl laughed. “Since you are here, we will make use of you. You’ll soon wish you never stowed away, pretending to be a soldier. You can be a messenger, a runner, for when we can’t send news over the wire. You will answer to me.”
“Yes sir.”
“But if I find out that you are a spy…” Captain Isenskowl lifted his gun and fired a shot in the ground, making the boy jump visibly. “You know what you will get.”
“Yes sir.”
“What is your name?”
“I-I-I don’t think I have one, sir. Everyone calls me ‘Boy’.”
“Everyone, eh? Even all the other soldiers, hmm?” Captain Isenskowl scowled knowingly at Albert. “Very well then, we will call you ‘Boy’ until we find a nice name to suit you, eh? What do you think, Boy?”
“Um, thank you, sir,” the boy answered, not knowing exactly what to answer.
By the end of the day, the boy knew the whole layout of the school and also where the other nearby camps of soldiers were located. Captain Isenskowl had kept him busy with relaying messages all over the front lines, and the boy soon found that Murnabeem was actually just beyond the front lines. Fifth Company were to hold this school in case of retreat. Soon the surrounding camps all knew him too.
The boy found that he often ended up with a large amount of washing to do for each camp. Wrinkly fingers seemed to be his lot in life. So he sang, whenever he had a large amount of washing.
“Wrinkly fingers, wrinkly skin,
My lot in life are these it seems.
Washing in water,
Hot and still boiling,
Uniform for the soldiers
That itch for clean clothes.
Wrinkly fingers, wrinkly skin,
My lot in life are these,
So it seems.”
This often made passing soldiers smile and laugh as the boy sang and washed, and hung their clothes up to dry. They had to admit that their washer boy did a good job, because when he was done, there would not be a single live louse left in their clothes.
One day, as the boy was thus washing, Captain Isenskowl ordered him to send a message to Major Peneer, who was in the fighting at the very front of the lines. As the message was urgent, the boy was obliged to leave his washing for the day and leave immediately.
It was almost dark when he reached the trenches and handed the note to Major Peneer.
“Damn!” the Major swore under his breath. “The communication lines will be down for a few hours.”
“What are we going to do then, Major?” his lieutenant, Fredric, asked.
“Captain Isenskowl suggests using the boy.”
All eyes turned to the boy, who was looking at the ground, not really listening, hoping the soldiers would not be angry that the washing would not be done tonight.
“Boy!”
“Yes sir!” the boy snapped to attention.
“The communication lines will be down for a while, due to enemy bombing. You will be running messages between camps for the next few days.”
“Yes sir!”
“Do you have any questions?”
“Um, sir, there’s a load of washing I wasn’t able to finish before I came,” the boy began hesitantly.
“Washing! Forget it! Those soldiers will have to wear what they are wearing for another day. Go and let all the other camps know that the lines are down and that you will be our main runner for the time being. Then report back to me.”
“Yes sir!”
The boy ran out to follow orders and then when he had breathlessly finished sending all the messages, he rushed to wring and hang up the washing, before reporting back to Major Peneer.
Just before he left, Captain Isenskowl stopped him.
“Tell Major Peneer that the Commander in Chief will be coming to Murnabeem to inspect our progress in person within a week.”
The boy delivered the message.
“Our position is not yet stable! The Commander in Chief must not come.” Major Peneer said. “We must keep the enemy’s heads down. I’ll get someone else to send that message. Go and have a rest, Boy. You haven’t stopped today yet.”
The boy went to a little corner of the trench and slept on a small pile of sacking that was kept there. He awoke to many shouts and the earth shaking beneath him. His countrymen had found the range of the trenches and were giving them a good raking. He ran out to be pushed aside by escaping soldiers, and was pulled into Major Peneer’s hole.
“Come on, Boy, we have to retreat a little way,” Major Peneer shouted above the noise.
They ran through the low ditches to the back trenches that were quieter. There Major Peneer and other CO’s rallied their men to prepare for the expected onslaught from the other side.
“Go tell Captain Isenskowl what is happening,” the Major ordered.
But just as he was about to turn and run, the boy felt an ominous inkling within him and without thinking, he grabbed Major Peneer and pushed him behind a mound of dirt.
“What the-?” Major Peneer pulled out his gun thinking that the boy was attacking him, when there was a great boom that deafened them both and the shockwave pushed them into a trench just beyond.
Breathing hard, Major Peneer peered up over the edge of the trench to see a giant crater close to where they had been standing.
“Thank you, Boy,” he breathed, putting his gun back in its holster. “You’ve saved my life.”
The boy didn’t answer.
Major Peneer turned the boy over and saw the strange angle at which his leg had landed.
The boy woke up in the hospital and looked to his right. A nurse hurried by him. He tried to move, and must have made a noise, because she came back. Searing pain shot up his leg.
“Aah. You’re awake. I’m the ward nurse, Alison.”
The boy tried to reply, but all that came out was a croak.
The nurse Alison, gave him small drink of water.
“How do you feel?”
“Awful,” the boy replied. “What’s happened at the front lines?”
“Aah, yes. They said you’d been the runner in the front while the communication lines were down. Major Peneer had you brought in; they say you saved his life. You’re too young to have been at the front lines though.”
The boy didn’t answer. He just sort of shrugged.
“Our side’s had to retreat; the enemy fire was too strong. They’ve retreated to the High School now.”
“Oh.”
“The doctor said that you were to get out of bed as soon as you were awake. There are other soldiers who need it, so if you’re ok, you can get up now.”
The boy got up slowly.
“What’s your name?”
The boy shook his head and shrugged. “Don’t remember. Everyone calls me ‘Boy’.”
“Well, then Boy, up you get.”
A doctor with a shock of brown hair wired by seams of grey came over.
“Hello there. I’m Doctor Stonehed. I hope you’re feeling much better?”
“Yes, a little.”
“Good, good. I’ll let Major Peneer know that you’re awake and he will send someone to fetch you. I’m sorry we have to kick you out of bed so quickly, but there are so many soldiers that need help at the moment, you see. You’ll be fine. Young ones like you tend to spring back very quickly. I think you’re a bit young to be a runner. I don’t know where they got you from, nor do I want to know. We’ve run out of plaster, so I’ve only been able to give you a splint and some medicine for the pain. There’s a pair of wooden crutches you can use to get around. I must be going now.”
The doctor hurried off to see to other groaning soldiers.
“You’re very lucky to be alive,” Alison said. “Here are your crutches. Just hop your way to the entrance of the hospital and put your foot up on the bench until someone comes for you.”
It wasn’t long before the boy was back at the school with loads of washing in front of him again, singing about his wrinkly fingers again, trying to ignore the pain in his leg. The soldiers laughed to see him swinging about on his crutches while somehow hanging up washing and fondly named him, Gympi. Almost every night, they would call him to come and tell them a story or sing them a few songs. He solemnly told them stories about what would be happening in their homes, animals in the wild, nonsense stories like an argument between soap bubbles and sang songs about anything and everything. He reminded the soldiers of their families far away in their own country.
He was there when the Commander in Chief arrived to inspect what was going on, although he didn’t realise when he had driven in. The Commander in Chief had not been deterred from coming to see the font lines for himself, despite the unstable position. All the soldiers in the school were standing at attention when they heard a clear voice singing about three frogs in a well.
“Are there any soldiers here missing?” The Commander in Chief demanded.
“No sir!”
“Then who, may I ask, is that singing?”
“It must be our washer boy, sir!” Major Peneer answered.
“Your washer boy?” the Commander in Chief said incredulously. “Why do you need a washer boy? Don’t your soldiers have their own hands to wash with?”
“He washes the soldiers’ clothes, sir and kills all the confounded lice for us.”
“I see. Why is he here?”
“Hello sir,” the boy had come up behind the Commander in Chief silently, startling him.
“What? Who-”
“Hello sir, I’m Gympi, the washer boy and former runner in the front lines. I stowed away on a truck to get here and have been helping out ever since. The place seemed rather quiet, so I came to see what was going on. Nice to meet you, sir,” Gympi stuck out his hand and the Commander in Chief shook it firmly, despite his surprised frown.
“I see. How long have you been helping out?”
“Almost 3 months, sir.”
“You had your crutches before then?”
“Oh no, sir. I only just got the crutches three days ago, after I woke up in hospital.”
“And how did you get into hospital?”
“I was acting as a runner while the communication lines were down, sir.”
“He saved my life from a lucky artillery shot, sir,” Major Peneer put in.
The Commander in Chief drew his breath in sharply through his teeth. “You saved the Major’s life? Did you stow away on a truck from over the old border? Are you one of our own boys?”
“No sir. Sorry, but definitely not. I stowed away at Heckler Camp. I think I grew up near Herrick.”
“Then what’s your real name?”
Gympi shrugged. “I don’t know.”
“How old are you?”
“I think I’m 12.”
The Commander in Chief turned abruptly on the Major.
“What were you doing, using such a young boy as a runner? An enemy boy even! He might have sabotaged something. War is no place for a boy.”
“I wouldn’t do that sir,” Gympi interrupted. “Much as I don’t like war, I reckon that helping out is better than starving. Perhaps I could even remind people of home and help to stop the war. Help make peace, you know. I don’t understand what the war’s about, but I’m sure that you’d all rather be safely at home than here.”
“True enough, Gympi. You can go and finish your washing now.”
“I’ve finished it already, sir.”
“Then run along, I haven’t finished inspecting the men.”
Gympi pivoted about on his crutches, about to leave and do some sewing that needed doing. He stopped a moment, with strange look on his face.
“Sorry sir. I can’t run and I won’t be able to when they get here in a few hours. They’re coming to take the school back. I suggest you leave right now, if you value your life.”
“What’s that you say?” the Commander in Chief asked sharply.
“I knew you were a spy,” Captain Isenskowl snarled, drawing his gun.
“Ears are very useful things,” Gympi replied holding up his hand. It was a gesture of authority one didn’t normally see in a child, “if you use them properly. Listen.”
It was quiet, but for the rustling of the wind in trees. Too quiet.
“They picked a good day to make an advance.”
A watchman sounded the alarm. The alarm sounded louder than usual in the stillness of the day. The enemy had been sighted.
“You should get out now, while you still can, sir!”
The Commander in Chief looked out at his men and shook his head. “I should have listened to the Martial. Never mind, I have been on the back lines for a long time. No good leader leads from behind. It’s about time I showed these men that I can still fight. Fetch me an ordinary soldier’s uniform.”
“Yes sir!” Gympi swung off.
“Men,” the Commander in Chief said. “Today I will be fighting as one of you, and we will hold this post or die fighting. I’m not running off and leaving you to die for me. I’ll not be remembered as a coward. Remember why we are here, who we are and what we are fighting for. Now let’s get ready to meet our enemy!”
Gympi brought back a uniform and the Commander in Chief changed out of his medalled dress uniform into the simple private’s clothes in one of the portable classrooms.
“Gympi. You stay in these portables until the fighting is over. It will be safer in here.”
“Yes sir.”
“You are a very bold and brave boy, Gympi.”
“Thank you sir, I hope you will survive this battle.”
“Thank you Gympi. I hope we will soon have peace again. Perhaps this war was all a big mistake.”
Not long later, the fighting began. Gympi sat hunched up in the most solid corner of the portable he could find, hoping that no stray bullets would find its way in here. How long he had huddled in that corner, he did not know. His mind was off with his imagination, trying to forget the terrifying situation that he was in.
Later that day or was it the next day? Gympi wasn’t sure, that the fighting stopped. He presumed that his countrymen had won this fight, from the sound of banging doors and shouts as if people were searching all the classrooms.
The door to his portable was suddenly flung open.
“There’s a boy in here!” came the shout and Gympi was pulled roughly from his corner.
“It’s a lame kid with crutches.”
“I’ve got a broken leg,” Gympi corrected.
“Did I ask you?” the soldier snarled.
“What are you doing here in the enemy’s camp?” the soldier demanded.
“What have you found?” came a shout from outside.
“A boy with a broken leg!”
Another soldier came in.
“Let me see him, Coombs.”
“Yes, Lieutenant.”
“What’s your name, kid?”
“Gympi.”
What kind of name is that for a kid?”
“They just called me Boy, before I broke my leg.”
“How old are you?”
“About 12.”
“How did you get here?”
“I came with the enemy, I stowed away on their truck.”
“Why?”
“I wanted to see whether we were winning or not. We couldn’t tell, down in Herrick.”
“You came from Herrick.?”
“Yes sir. I got caught and have been working for the enemy as washer boy and was a runner before I broke my leg.”
“How did you break your leg?”
“I fell into a trench during the bombing.”
“Tell me the messages they had you send.”
“There was nothing important. Just things like when the communication was down or fetching something or needing to get something fixed.”
“A traitor. That’s what this boy is. A traitor,” Coombs sneered.
“I’m not a traitor,” Gympi replied stoutly.
“That’s what you say,” Coombs laughed. It wasn’t a pleasant laugh.
“Leave him alone, Coombs,” the Lieutenant said. “He’s just a boy.”
“Did he fight for us? Did he sabotage anything while he had the chance? Ha, boy?”
“No. I didn’t think of it.”
“Of course not. He’d only have thought of his own skin.”
“Stop it Coombs! Leave him alone. If there is no one else in these rooms, let’s go see to the prisoners.”
“Yes sir,” Coombs said sullenly, casting a yellow eye over Gympi.
“Can I come, sir?” Gympi suddenly piped up.
“Well if you want to. It’s not a pretty sight out there. Not a sight for one as young as you.”
“I’ve seen plenty like that before, sir,” Gympi replied.
“Very well then, if you want to.”
“How many prisoners were taken?” Gympi asked as he swung after the Lieutenant and Coombs.
“Only about 15 men.”
“Is that all? Of all the 900 men stationed here, you only managed to capture 15 of them?”
“We killed all the rest of them, didn’t we?” Coombs laughed, making Gympi wince.
“So there were 900 men stationed here. Must’ve been pretty cramped,” the Lieutenant wrinkled his nose.
“It was pretty cramped,” Gympi affirmed, taking care to look only at the ground, not wanting to see any more of the dead and bloodied bodies lying around than he needed to.
The 15 prisoners were only slightly wounded, and looked up when the Lieutenant, Coombs and Gympi came into the room.
“So you’re all right then, are you Gympi?” the Commander in Chief asked. He, the Major, Albert and a few other men had survived.
“Yes sir. I’m fine.”
“Who’s this?” a commanding officer asked.
“A boy we found hiding in the classrooms, Colonel, sir!” the lieutenant replied.
“Well these men did express some concern for a boy that was hiding in the portables. You must be Gympi. The Major here says that you were a washer and messenger boy for them and that you saved his life.”
“Yes sir. That’s right. I’d have done the same for you.”
“Why?”
“I don’t like all this killing.”
Later that night, Gympi was lying awake in the classroom next to the one containing the prisoners, listening to his countrymen celebrating their victory, when he heard someone stumbling into the prisoner’s room, cursing and kicking. Gympi knew that all the prisoners were unable to defend themselves.
Gympi got up and came out of his room, rushing into the room next door.
“Stop it! Stop it!” he shouted. “Isn’t it enough that they are your prisoners? Would you want to be in their position? Stop it!”
Somebody with breath reeking of alcohol, grabbed Gympi, and thrust his face in Gympi’s.
“If it isn’t the little traitor,” Coombs slurred. “Well, if you don’t want them to be hurt, then you certainly will, you little sneak. Hey mates, here’s one turned bad. He helped the enemy, so he’s got to be one of them right?”
“Right!” came the hoarse voices of other men.
Somebody snatched the crutches from Gympi’s hands. Another punched him in the stomach. Gympi fell down. Boots kicked and crunched. The other prisoners tried to stop them, but were just thrown off, kicked severely and told to stay put. Somebody had taken up his crutches and was hitting him with them. Snap! Something broke.
Gympi groaned. His eyes felt painfully dry and everything hurt. He could hear moans around him and a few screams. Sounds like the hospital, he thought. He tried to open his eyes, but it was as if a great weight had been placed on them and it was a great effort to even try. He gave up and drifted back into oblivion.
Gympi opened his eyes and struggled to sit up. He screamed in pain and fell back down on the bed.
“Hello,” said a cheerful voice. “How are you feeling?”
“Water,” Gympi croaked.
“Here you go, dear.”
Someone handed him a glass of warm water and helped him sit up carefully.
“Thanks,” Gympi was about to gulp it down when a hand stayed him.
“Wait. You have to drink slowly or you’ll make yourself sick.”
“Aren’t I already sick?” Gympi whispered, taking the sip allowed him by the hand.
“I’m Alison. Do you remember me?”
“Umm.”
“Maybe not? You were here last time when you broke your leg. Since then, this hospital’s been taken back by your own countrymen.”
“Oh.”
“Ah. The hero’s awake now, is he?” Doctor Stonehed came bustling up, trying to find the end of a roll of bandages he had somehow tangled up.
“Here sir, I’ll do that,” Alison smiled, taking the bandages from the doctor’s fumbling attempts, quickly untangling it and rolling it back up neatly.
“Never seem to be able to get it right,” he mumbled to himself. “Thank you Alison.”
The doctor leaned in closer so that Gympi could hear his soft words, “Between us, the Commander in Chief and Major Peneer thank you for stopping your soldiers from killing them that night. You’ve become a real hero in our country. I would like to thank you too, for saving their lives.”
Gympi blinked.
“Oh. Umm.”
Doctor Stonehed smiled.
“Your father would be very proud if he knew you were so brave, Gympi.”
“My father…? Do you know him?”
“No, but I would be very proud of you if I were your father. Also the Commander in Chief and Major Peneer managed to escape back across the border a few days ago, while you were out of it. They got lucky. Apparently there was an accident in Danwick, but they managed to escape with minimal injuries.”
“O-oh.”
“You’re tired. You’ve been ill this past week. Go back to sleep. You’ll feel better when you wake up.”
“Yes sir.”
“Close your eyes.”
Gympi obeyed. The doctor was a good man.
Gympi’s stomach growled. It growled very loudly.
“Good morning, Gympi. That’s your name now isn’t it?” Alison said cheerfully. “I brought you some breakfast.”
Alison helped Gympi to sit up carefully and gave him some breakfast.
“You eat slowly now, ok kid? I’ll be back later to collect your dishes. I’ve got to feed the other men too,” Alison wheeled a trolley between beds, handing out breakfast to the men that could not get up and walk to the kitchen themselves.
Gympi looked around as he ate. His room contained more beds than it was originally made for. Most of the other patients in his room were other soldiers with various injuries. Some were groaning in pain, some were quiet and still. Still others, like him were awake and thoughtful, munching on the buns they’d been given for breakfast. There was also a smell of dirt and infected wounds, smells that a hospital seldom had before the war had begun.
“Finished?” Alison had come back and was loading trays and dishes back onto the trolley.
“Yes. Thanks,” Gympi replied. His stomach growled aloud thankfully.
Alison laughed.
“The doctor will be along soon, to check on everyone in this room. So sit tight a little longer. You’re not in too much pain?”
Gympi shook his head and winced.
Alison nodded understanding, “The doctor will see to it.”
She trundled off, talking cheerfully to other patients.
Doctor Stonehed entered the room and inspected his patients. Followed by another man and a nurse, he directed changes of bandages or helped patients to sit up in bed. Eventually he came to Gympi.
“Good morning, Gympi. How are you feeling?”
Gympi shrugged. “Sore. It hurts to move.”
Doctor Stonehed nodded to the nurse, who gave Gympi a tablet and a glass of water.
“Unfortunately we don’t have many painkillers, but we’ll let you have this one. I’m sure you understand that we can’t give everyone much pain relief, but this should last you a little while. Now, let’s see how all your injuries are going.”
Doctor Stonehed prodded and poked Gympi gently. Changing a bandage here and there.
“Luckily for you,” he said as he made sure that the plaster on both of Gympi’s legs was not too tight, “that we had just got a new batch of plaster when you came in. You were pretty well broken up, so it might all take a little while to heal.”
After he had finished, Doctor Stonehed smiled, though there was a shadow of uncertainty about it this time.
“You’ll be fine. As I told you last time, young people like you always spring back to shape quite quickly. Now, I don’t want you to lie down or get back into bed for the rest of the day if you can manage it, ok? Well, I must be off now. See you later Gympi.”
The doctor, his assistant and nurse went to the next bed, leaving Gympi alone.
Gympi slowly swung his heavy legs over the edge of the bed and let them dangle. They throbbed and he pulled them back up with effort. He wished he could remember who he was and where he came from. He wished he wasn’t in the hospital and that the war had never started. He wished he was back at home, but where was home? He wanted his mother, but all her could remember of her was a warm presence
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Friday, February 8, 2013
The Legend of Spyri and Gympi (1)
In the near future, I will be posting here parts of the story Legend of Spyri and Gympi. Critics have advised the author, Korallieam, that this story it is too straightforwardly for children - ie told rather than shown. Korallieam likes it as it is. I just think it's unique. To each his own.
The Legend of Spyri and Gympi - PART 1
Stuart Mendleton was known as the school bully. He was mean, rough and generally disliked, as school bullies usually are. He was a tall, well-built boy, with roughly cut, coarse brown hair and liked to be the centre of attention. Attention was something his parents seldom gave him as they were usually away at work until late. Stuart’s two brothers were already in high school and ignored him, unless he had done something to annoy them.
Andrew Cotton on the other hand, was the Mayor of Thistlowood’s only son – the golden boy, and the town’s folk loved to gossip about what he had been up to next. He was the kind of boy people loved and yet were exasperated by; a thoughtful child with his own unique view of things. Andrew was mature beyond his years, some said. He was the school clown; but he easily held the top marks in class and could hold the other school children spell-bound by his stories and acting or send them into fits of laughter by the songs he was forever making up. If something big was going on in town, you could be sure to find Andrew in the middle of it. You could then easily understand why Stuart’s main aim in life was to make Andrew’s life as miserable as possible.
Today was like every other school day. It was lunchtime and Stuart was out to hunt Andrew down. Of course Andrew knew that and was carefully staying on the other side of the school grounds, hoping to avoid any confrontations. He had some younger children around him, begging him to finish the story he had been telling them the day before.
Being unable to find Andrew after several circuits of the school grounds, Stuart eventually gave up, and began picking on the kids nearest to him. Meanwhile, Andrew had given in to the first graders and sat down to finish the tale of ‘the duck and the fox’. After a while, the sounds of a 2nd grade kid being tormented filtered over to where Andrew was acting out the story. In the middle of being a fox and pretending to follow the duck’s trail with his nose, Andrew suddenly lifted his head, winked at the children around him and began singing.
All the school children knew this song. It was a rousing, marching sort of song that Andrew had made up to spite Stuart. When Andrew sang this song, it meant he was ready for a fight. He couldn’t stand bullying and letting other kids get picked on.
"Mendle’s a-meddling again, once again, once again.
Mendle’s being a coward again, once again, once again.
Picking on other kids is his game,
Mean and nasty,
Fists and growling,
Mendleton will never beat us down,
Beat us down,
Ho, no he won’t!"
Stuart heard the song and grinned wolfishly, shoving the child he’d been tormenting away. He hated the song, but at least he knew that Andrew was coming.
Children around the playground who heard Andrew’s strong voice came to watch and see whether Andrew would win this time. Andrew had never actually won before, at least not against Stuart’s strong fists, but he always had something to say.
“Hello Stuart. You step on another kid by accident again?” Andrew asked, helping the boy up. “You all right, Jamie? A pity he never treads on his own feet, he’s so clumsy, you’d almost expect it of him, wouldn’t you? Such an elephant, never mind, we’d better get out of the way. He’s coming full charge.”
Jamie hurriedly pressed himself into the safety of the crowd, as Andrew just managed to dodge Stuart’s first swing. Jessica Frilby, daughter of Stanton Frilby, the town grocer, took Jamie to the sick bay as evidence of another fight.
Stuart noted Jessica, and reminded himself to do something unobtrusively mean to her next time he met her. Maybe he would trip her up while she was taking a basket of eggs to old Granny Sanders again.
“You were looking for me before weren’t you, Meddleton?” Andrew was asking.
“The name’s Mendleton, you singing sissy!” Stuart growled. “You made a fool of me in class again. Who says I can’t spell, eh? Who says I can’t read? O’ course I can, every sixth grader can!”
Andrew laughed.
“That’s why you’re always at the bottom of the class? Failed sixth grade for the fourth year running now, haven’t you? We’d be quite happy to teach you to read you know.”
All the children laughed. Fancy a sixth grader being unable to read. They knew Stuart had been stupid, but not that stupid. Anyway, who could be bothered teaching that lumbering Neanderthal to read?
Stuart growled and jumped on Andrew. He could too read! He just couldn’t read and spell as well as every other sixth grader.
The watching children all cheered Andrew on and booed Stuart’s every swing, although they had to hurriedly back off every now and then, whenever Stuart made a wild charge in their direction to shut them up.
Miss Williams and Mr Smith came hurrying into the playground, followed by a tagging Jessica Frilby. All the children scattered as Mr Smith roared, “Ok boys! Break it up or I’ll break up you both up!”
Andrew somersaulted backwards and stood on his hands, wagging his toes in mock horror. His shoes had somehow gotten to the other side of the school yard.
“You can’t break me up or Father won’t get to do it himself!”
“That’s enough, Andrew,” Miss Williams said firmly, but with a sigh. “We’ll have to let your parents know. Again. You too, Stuart. Come inside now, both of you.”
“Try and make me,” Stuart challenged, pointing a finger at Andrew who was fetching his far flung shoes. “That – that stuck up, know-it-all, that sissy, can’t even fight me proper like a man and all of you always come and save his soft little butt. He’s always making fun of me and you always pick on me, like it’s my fault!”
“Calm down, Stuart,” Mr Smith said, stepping toward Stuart. “You’re both getting into equal trouble. You realise this is about the twentieth fight the two of you have had this week?”
“The tenth,” Andrew corrected. “This is our tenth fight this week.”
“Tenth then,” Mr Smith glowered at Andrew. “I am thinking that Mr Proctor might suspend the two of you from school soon. I would personally prefer to expel both of you, for this continuous atrocious behaviour. You know you are the role models for the school! Now come!”
Both boys followed Miss Williams and Mr Smith inside. One glowering and angry. The other quiet and rather thoughtful.
Once they were inside the sick bay having their cuts treated before being sent to the principle, Mr Proctor, Miss Williams sighed.
“What will your father say, Andrew?”
“Father?” Andrew blinked and drew himself up ram-rod straight, tilting his head a little to one side, lowering his voice and shaking his head sadly. “Andrew, Andrew, what am I going to do with you son? I’ve told you over and over not to get into fights. Why do you have to grieve your mother like this? One day you are going to grow up and become mayor in my place. We can’t have you getting up and into fights all the time.”
Miss Williams laughed in spite of herself at Andrew’s perfect imitation of his father.
Andrew shrugged and gave an impish grin, “I’m not going to be Mayor of Thistlowood, when I grow up. Stuart is.”
“What did you say, Andrew?” Miss Williams asked in shock. “How can Stuart become mayor, he-he… well, he can’t even…”
Miss Williams trailed off as she remembered that Stuart was in the same room, watching them.
Andrew shrugged. “Stuart will make an excellent mayor when he grows up, that’s all. I won’t be around often enough to be elected to the job.”
“What are you going to become then, Andrew? What will you be when you grow up?”
“Travelling,” Andrew replied shortly, with such an odd look on his face that Miss Williams asked him no further. “I’ll be travelling.”
“You’re a strange child, Andrew,” she said quietly.
“I know,” Andrew laughed, jumping up off his chair. “Let’s go see Mr Proctor now, shall we?”
He started singing his happy song, a song that everyone in town knew well, having heard it from him over and over. This song, compared to the song he used to stir up Stuart, was more quiet and lilting in melody.
“Sun a-shining in the sky,
Looking down on happy flowers,
Watching laughter,
Bathed in warmth,
Singing, dancing,
Smiling.
Wind a-breezing through the trees,
Tickling leafy boughs,
Oh, that life would ever be,
Full of joy and song.”
Miss Williams shook her head and exchanged glances with Mr Smith, as they followed Andrew to the principle’s office. Stuart trailed behind, wondering whether he should be insulted at Andrew saying that he would be mayor when he grew up or whether it was supposed to be a compliment. That boy had to be raving mad. Absolute nuts.
“Andrew Cotton. Stuart Mendleton,” said Mr Proctor’s slow voice. “You have both been very disruptive this past week, and it seems you still have not been able to sort out your differences in a gentlemanly manner. Neither of you are actually very bad boys, so I have been extremely lenient with you both, but enough is enough. Starting this Monday, you will be suspended for a week. I do not expect to see either of you in school until Monday the 14th of May. Is that understood?”
“Yes sir,” both boys answered.
“It is a shame, Andrew, that you have not been able to uphold your father’s good name. Your actions allow others to talk about him behind his back. You know this and so do I. Now go back to class, both of you. I must write a letter to both of your parents.”
“Yes sir.”
Stuart shuffled out of the room with his hand in his pockets, indifferent to the punishment. He would have a whole week to do what he wanted and not have to go to school. He didn’t care what his parents would say. His father would cane him again, but that would be it.
Andrew was still very thoughtful, but before he closed the door, he turned around with a look that seemed not unlike relief and said quietly, “Thank you, Mr Proctor.”
Mr Proctor looked at the closed door, slightly confused, as he listened to the whistled ‘I hear the band far away’ fade down the corridor. In all of his school life, Andrew had never thanked him for punishment of any sort. He had always taken any punishment quietly, that much was true, but he had always been afraid to hear what his father would say when he got home. He had always had a look of suspense on his face. Today, he had been as calm as – as calm as… strangely enough to Mr Proctor, it seemed like the same calmness or stillness that could be seen before a large storm. Which was indeed, a strange way of putting it, yet it seemed to mirror Andrew’s mood. He had been as calm as nature before a storm.
Andrew and Stuart entered the classroom, where Miss Williams had everyone doing maths exercises.
“Come in and take your seats, Andrew, Stuart,” she said. “We’re just doing some fractions and decimals.”
Andrew and Stuart sat down and looked at the sheets of maths before them.
“What did you get this time, Andrew?” Tony, Andrew’s desk mate whispered.
“A week’s suspension.”
“Whoa! Your dad’s not gonna be too happy when you get home tonight, is he?”
“Nope.”
“How can you be so… you know, calm, about it?”
Andrew shrugged.
“Tony!” called Miss Williams. “Stop bothering Andrew, and get on with your work”
“Yes, Miss Williams.”
But too late, others had overheard the whispers, and before long, the whole class, then the whole school knew about it. They felt sorry for Andrew and agreed that it was all Stuart’s fault.
As the home bell rang, Miss Williams gave Andrew and Stuart a pile of papers to do as homework over their suspension period.
“We’re not going to get these done, you know Miss,” Andrew had said, still with that strange preoccupied look on his face.
Then they had gone home, with Andrew singing his usual walking song and some of the younger children marching in a line behind him, playing follow the leader.
“Step out, step out!
Left and right,
And left and right!
Marching, walking,
Swinging arms.
High and low,
Merrily ho!
Stepping out in day so bright
Or rain with slight,
Clouded sky,
Or shimmered sigh,
Left and right,
And left and right!
Swinging high and low,
Merrily ho!”
Andrew and Stuart received what punishment they had expected from their parents. Andrew lost all pocket money for a month and Stuart, a few quick swipes of the cane. As expected, both received a large amount of disappointment from their parents.
“Why can’t you uphold our family’s good name?” Andrew’s father sighed.
“Why can’t you just pull up your socks and be useful for once?” Stuart’s father growled.
It was over the week end that things changed. It was announced there would be war and by Monday, the whole town’s talk was about the war. Everyone had forgotten about Andrew and Stuart. The border was only a few townships away. The children were forbidden outside the town’s borders.
By Tuesday, most of the men had received their summons to join the army.
On Wednesday, many women waved a tearful farewell to their men. A handful of men, such as Andrew and Stuart’s fathers had not yet received their summons. Jessica’s father was considered unfit for service, being lame in one foot and so could not be go.
Thursday was a quiet day. Everyone was sad and silent. The last few men finally received their summons to join the army.
But it was on Friday, before they had left home, that the war came to Thistlowood. It was sudden and quite unexpected. That the enemy would have pushed through this far, without their hearing of it!
It was about 10 o’clock in the morning, and all the town’s folk were going about their usual work, when a man suddenly ran into the town shouting. He was followed by several enemy soldiers.
The enemy army had surrounded Thistlowood and everyone, even the bewildered children in school were called to the town hall for a roll call. Andrew and Stuart were there too.
The captain that had taken now taken control of the town took good note of all the different people and their jobs. This town was expected to be some distance from the front lines and his orders were to quell any resistance but keep the town intact.
“I am Captain Isenskowl and from now on, this town will listen to me,” was what he said.
And that was that. Andrew’s father could no longer leave town to join the war effort, he was already in it. The entire town was told that food, water and electricity would be rationed from now on. Resistance was futile and would be put down immediately.
Mayor Timothy Cotton and a few others including Mr Mendleton openly opposed Captain Isenskowl’s rule and meagre rations. They agreed that they would fight to the death and the town’s folk supported them. The enemy would never take their town!
That night, was the Night of Burning. Someone had informed the enemy of which houses belonged to the main rebels. One boy had seen the informer, but things happened too quickly, and before he could tell anyone, it was too late.
Many people died or were lost and nobody knew what had become of them. Men, women, young and old. The town was in chaos… and Captain Isenskowl established the town as an enemy base.
(stay tuned for part 2)
The Legend of Spyri and Gympi - PART 1
Stuart Mendleton was known as the school bully. He was mean, rough and generally disliked, as school bullies usually are. He was a tall, well-built boy, with roughly cut, coarse brown hair and liked to be the centre of attention. Attention was something his parents seldom gave him as they were usually away at work until late. Stuart’s two brothers were already in high school and ignored him, unless he had done something to annoy them.
Andrew Cotton on the other hand, was the Mayor of Thistlowood’s only son – the golden boy, and the town’s folk loved to gossip about what he had been up to next. He was the kind of boy people loved and yet were exasperated by; a thoughtful child with his own unique view of things. Andrew was mature beyond his years, some said. He was the school clown; but he easily held the top marks in class and could hold the other school children spell-bound by his stories and acting or send them into fits of laughter by the songs he was forever making up. If something big was going on in town, you could be sure to find Andrew in the middle of it. You could then easily understand why Stuart’s main aim in life was to make Andrew’s life as miserable as possible.
Today was like every other school day. It was lunchtime and Stuart was out to hunt Andrew down. Of course Andrew knew that and was carefully staying on the other side of the school grounds, hoping to avoid any confrontations. He had some younger children around him, begging him to finish the story he had been telling them the day before.
Being unable to find Andrew after several circuits of the school grounds, Stuart eventually gave up, and began picking on the kids nearest to him. Meanwhile, Andrew had given in to the first graders and sat down to finish the tale of ‘the duck and the fox’. After a while, the sounds of a 2nd grade kid being tormented filtered over to where Andrew was acting out the story. In the middle of being a fox and pretending to follow the duck’s trail with his nose, Andrew suddenly lifted his head, winked at the children around him and began singing.
All the school children knew this song. It was a rousing, marching sort of song that Andrew had made up to spite Stuart. When Andrew sang this song, it meant he was ready for a fight. He couldn’t stand bullying and letting other kids get picked on.
"Mendle’s a-meddling again, once again, once again.
Mendle’s being a coward again, once again, once again.
Picking on other kids is his game,
Mean and nasty,
Fists and growling,
Mendleton will never beat us down,
Beat us down,
Ho, no he won’t!"
Stuart heard the song and grinned wolfishly, shoving the child he’d been tormenting away. He hated the song, but at least he knew that Andrew was coming.
Children around the playground who heard Andrew’s strong voice came to watch and see whether Andrew would win this time. Andrew had never actually won before, at least not against Stuart’s strong fists, but he always had something to say.
“Hello Stuart. You step on another kid by accident again?” Andrew asked, helping the boy up. “You all right, Jamie? A pity he never treads on his own feet, he’s so clumsy, you’d almost expect it of him, wouldn’t you? Such an elephant, never mind, we’d better get out of the way. He’s coming full charge.”
Jamie hurriedly pressed himself into the safety of the crowd, as Andrew just managed to dodge Stuart’s first swing. Jessica Frilby, daughter of Stanton Frilby, the town grocer, took Jamie to the sick bay as evidence of another fight.
Stuart noted Jessica, and reminded himself to do something unobtrusively mean to her next time he met her. Maybe he would trip her up while she was taking a basket of eggs to old Granny Sanders again.
“You were looking for me before weren’t you, Meddleton?” Andrew was asking.
“The name’s Mendleton, you singing sissy!” Stuart growled. “You made a fool of me in class again. Who says I can’t spell, eh? Who says I can’t read? O’ course I can, every sixth grader can!”
Andrew laughed.
“That’s why you’re always at the bottom of the class? Failed sixth grade for the fourth year running now, haven’t you? We’d be quite happy to teach you to read you know.”
All the children laughed. Fancy a sixth grader being unable to read. They knew Stuart had been stupid, but not that stupid. Anyway, who could be bothered teaching that lumbering Neanderthal to read?
Stuart growled and jumped on Andrew. He could too read! He just couldn’t read and spell as well as every other sixth grader.
The watching children all cheered Andrew on and booed Stuart’s every swing, although they had to hurriedly back off every now and then, whenever Stuart made a wild charge in their direction to shut them up.
Miss Williams and Mr Smith came hurrying into the playground, followed by a tagging Jessica Frilby. All the children scattered as Mr Smith roared, “Ok boys! Break it up or I’ll break up you both up!”
Andrew somersaulted backwards and stood on his hands, wagging his toes in mock horror. His shoes had somehow gotten to the other side of the school yard.
“You can’t break me up or Father won’t get to do it himself!”
“That’s enough, Andrew,” Miss Williams said firmly, but with a sigh. “We’ll have to let your parents know. Again. You too, Stuart. Come inside now, both of you.”
“Try and make me,” Stuart challenged, pointing a finger at Andrew who was fetching his far flung shoes. “That – that stuck up, know-it-all, that sissy, can’t even fight me proper like a man and all of you always come and save his soft little butt. He’s always making fun of me and you always pick on me, like it’s my fault!”
“Calm down, Stuart,” Mr Smith said, stepping toward Stuart. “You’re both getting into equal trouble. You realise this is about the twentieth fight the two of you have had this week?”
“The tenth,” Andrew corrected. “This is our tenth fight this week.”
“Tenth then,” Mr Smith glowered at Andrew. “I am thinking that Mr Proctor might suspend the two of you from school soon. I would personally prefer to expel both of you, for this continuous atrocious behaviour. You know you are the role models for the school! Now come!”
Both boys followed Miss Williams and Mr Smith inside. One glowering and angry. The other quiet and rather thoughtful.
Once they were inside the sick bay having their cuts treated before being sent to the principle, Mr Proctor, Miss Williams sighed.
“What will your father say, Andrew?”
“Father?” Andrew blinked and drew himself up ram-rod straight, tilting his head a little to one side, lowering his voice and shaking his head sadly. “Andrew, Andrew, what am I going to do with you son? I’ve told you over and over not to get into fights. Why do you have to grieve your mother like this? One day you are going to grow up and become mayor in my place. We can’t have you getting up and into fights all the time.”
Miss Williams laughed in spite of herself at Andrew’s perfect imitation of his father.
Andrew shrugged and gave an impish grin, “I’m not going to be Mayor of Thistlowood, when I grow up. Stuart is.”
“What did you say, Andrew?” Miss Williams asked in shock. “How can Stuart become mayor, he-he… well, he can’t even…”
Miss Williams trailed off as she remembered that Stuart was in the same room, watching them.
Andrew shrugged. “Stuart will make an excellent mayor when he grows up, that’s all. I won’t be around often enough to be elected to the job.”
“What are you going to become then, Andrew? What will you be when you grow up?”
“Travelling,” Andrew replied shortly, with such an odd look on his face that Miss Williams asked him no further. “I’ll be travelling.”
“You’re a strange child, Andrew,” she said quietly.
“I know,” Andrew laughed, jumping up off his chair. “Let’s go see Mr Proctor now, shall we?”
He started singing his happy song, a song that everyone in town knew well, having heard it from him over and over. This song, compared to the song he used to stir up Stuart, was more quiet and lilting in melody.
“Sun a-shining in the sky,
Looking down on happy flowers,
Watching laughter,
Bathed in warmth,
Singing, dancing,
Smiling.
Wind a-breezing through the trees,
Tickling leafy boughs,
Oh, that life would ever be,
Full of joy and song.”
Miss Williams shook her head and exchanged glances with Mr Smith, as they followed Andrew to the principle’s office. Stuart trailed behind, wondering whether he should be insulted at Andrew saying that he would be mayor when he grew up or whether it was supposed to be a compliment. That boy had to be raving mad. Absolute nuts.
“Andrew Cotton. Stuart Mendleton,” said Mr Proctor’s slow voice. “You have both been very disruptive this past week, and it seems you still have not been able to sort out your differences in a gentlemanly manner. Neither of you are actually very bad boys, so I have been extremely lenient with you both, but enough is enough. Starting this Monday, you will be suspended for a week. I do not expect to see either of you in school until Monday the 14th of May. Is that understood?”
“Yes sir,” both boys answered.
“It is a shame, Andrew, that you have not been able to uphold your father’s good name. Your actions allow others to talk about him behind his back. You know this and so do I. Now go back to class, both of you. I must write a letter to both of your parents.”
“Yes sir.”
Stuart shuffled out of the room with his hand in his pockets, indifferent to the punishment. He would have a whole week to do what he wanted and not have to go to school. He didn’t care what his parents would say. His father would cane him again, but that would be it.
Andrew was still very thoughtful, but before he closed the door, he turned around with a look that seemed not unlike relief and said quietly, “Thank you, Mr Proctor.”
Mr Proctor looked at the closed door, slightly confused, as he listened to the whistled ‘I hear the band far away’ fade down the corridor. In all of his school life, Andrew had never thanked him for punishment of any sort. He had always taken any punishment quietly, that much was true, but he had always been afraid to hear what his father would say when he got home. He had always had a look of suspense on his face. Today, he had been as calm as – as calm as… strangely enough to Mr Proctor, it seemed like the same calmness or stillness that could be seen before a large storm. Which was indeed, a strange way of putting it, yet it seemed to mirror Andrew’s mood. He had been as calm as nature before a storm.
Andrew and Stuart entered the classroom, where Miss Williams had everyone doing maths exercises.
“Come in and take your seats, Andrew, Stuart,” she said. “We’re just doing some fractions and decimals.”
Andrew and Stuart sat down and looked at the sheets of maths before them.
“What did you get this time, Andrew?” Tony, Andrew’s desk mate whispered.
“A week’s suspension.”
“Whoa! Your dad’s not gonna be too happy when you get home tonight, is he?”
“Nope.”
“How can you be so… you know, calm, about it?”
Andrew shrugged.
“Tony!” called Miss Williams. “Stop bothering Andrew, and get on with your work”
“Yes, Miss Williams.”
But too late, others had overheard the whispers, and before long, the whole class, then the whole school knew about it. They felt sorry for Andrew and agreed that it was all Stuart’s fault.
As the home bell rang, Miss Williams gave Andrew and Stuart a pile of papers to do as homework over their suspension period.
“We’re not going to get these done, you know Miss,” Andrew had said, still with that strange preoccupied look on his face.
Then they had gone home, with Andrew singing his usual walking song and some of the younger children marching in a line behind him, playing follow the leader.
“Step out, step out!
Left and right,
And left and right!
Marching, walking,
Swinging arms.
High and low,
Merrily ho!
Stepping out in day so bright
Or rain with slight,
Clouded sky,
Or shimmered sigh,
Left and right,
And left and right!
Swinging high and low,
Merrily ho!”
Andrew and Stuart received what punishment they had expected from their parents. Andrew lost all pocket money for a month and Stuart, a few quick swipes of the cane. As expected, both received a large amount of disappointment from their parents.
“Why can’t you uphold our family’s good name?” Andrew’s father sighed.
“Why can’t you just pull up your socks and be useful for once?” Stuart’s father growled.
It was over the week end that things changed. It was announced there would be war and by Monday, the whole town’s talk was about the war. Everyone had forgotten about Andrew and Stuart. The border was only a few townships away. The children were forbidden outside the town’s borders.
By Tuesday, most of the men had received their summons to join the army.
On Wednesday, many women waved a tearful farewell to their men. A handful of men, such as Andrew and Stuart’s fathers had not yet received their summons. Jessica’s father was considered unfit for service, being lame in one foot and so could not be go.
Thursday was a quiet day. Everyone was sad and silent. The last few men finally received their summons to join the army.
But it was on Friday, before they had left home, that the war came to Thistlowood. It was sudden and quite unexpected. That the enemy would have pushed through this far, without their hearing of it!
It was about 10 o’clock in the morning, and all the town’s folk were going about their usual work, when a man suddenly ran into the town shouting. He was followed by several enemy soldiers.
The enemy army had surrounded Thistlowood and everyone, even the bewildered children in school were called to the town hall for a roll call. Andrew and Stuart were there too.
The captain that had taken now taken control of the town took good note of all the different people and their jobs. This town was expected to be some distance from the front lines and his orders were to quell any resistance but keep the town intact.
“I am Captain Isenskowl and from now on, this town will listen to me,” was what he said.
And that was that. Andrew’s father could no longer leave town to join the war effort, he was already in it. The entire town was told that food, water and electricity would be rationed from now on. Resistance was futile and would be put down immediately.
Mayor Timothy Cotton and a few others including Mr Mendleton openly opposed Captain Isenskowl’s rule and meagre rations. They agreed that they would fight to the death and the town’s folk supported them. The enemy would never take their town!
That night, was the Night of Burning. Someone had informed the enemy of which houses belonged to the main rebels. One boy had seen the informer, but things happened too quickly, and before he could tell anyone, it was too late.
Many people died or were lost and nobody knew what had become of them. Men, women, young and old. The town was in chaos… and Captain Isenskowl established the town as an enemy base.
(stay tuned for part 2)
Friday, September 7, 2012
My world
You've all probably been wondering why Twylla talks about her world and its history, whilst I keep relatively silent regarding mine. The truth is, first, I'm not as good a story teller, and second, frankly it's a little too confusing. I'm still trying to sort it out. If you've read some of my earliest posts, you might have gotten a bit of an idea about what my world is like. It's something like that and yet... nothing like that. I don't think I'll ever get it right.
Tell you what, I'll just type and one day, I'll come back and refine everything.
It's been at least 87 years since the Battle of the Cliffs. That's the final battle of the Maguiren's War. Madorra killed/locked King Maguiren up in one of his machines - he's probably long dead by now. My siblings and I were children at that time - special specimens that Maguiren studied and experimented on. We overcame the Breakers who had the ability to negate any other gifts besides their own. The rest of the world picked itself back up and us gifted ones tried to pretend our gifts didn't exist, so that the less gifted ones would have no cause to attack us as they did the Breakers. Seeing as it was Maguiren who had caused all the latent gifts to rise to the fore, the normal people saw all of us who had been affected by the Burning Fever (hence becoming more gifted) as enemies. My siblings and I went to Madorra's home deep in the Dividing Ranges, where we were brought up.
All my siblings have moved to the other side of the world and have families. Nobody there has heard of the wars that have been ongoing for the past 100 years on this side of the mountains and the Burning Fever didn't affect anyone over there. As such, all the people there are normal people and much more advanced in technology. My siblings are happy that they don't have to think anymore about the war. I differ in opinion. I believe we at least owe our people what assistance we can. Especially after all the destruction we wrought during the war.
It is normal for people to have gifts. Some are just more obvious or more unnatural than others. For example, some people are excellent cooks, some amazing engineers, some are good with their hands, some very good at academics. Some people have excellent memories and some people while forgetful, may excel in various art forms. Some people are good at starting fires, others are good at putting them out. I'm sure you understand my meaning.
These are the natural gifts a person develops over the course of their life, according to the mix of genetics and environmental factors. The gifts that Maguiren stirred up through his virus were abnormal. Unusual. These included 'superhuman' abilities. Anything and everything you can imagine, popped up in all sorts of people. These included Mind's Ear (the ability to hear another's thoughts), Flame (the ability to produce and hold fire in the hand), Breaking (the ability to break the effect of any other gift), Flying, Invisibility, Extra-ordinary Strength, Stealth, etc. These are but a few of the myriads that are still out there.
Although Maguiren is gone, his virus continues to infect people. Many of the gifted have become vagabonds or outlaws. Some are killed. Most are forcefully taken by the ruling powers in their countries to serve the royal families.
Since Maguiren's rule has broken, the old monarchies have sprung back up and taken as much advantage of the people as they can. Some of them had been locked away in prisons during Maguiren's reign and were definitely insane. The only reason anyone puts up with them is because their Councillors are enjoying the power they wield.
It's sad, but there you are.
Tell you what, I'll just type and one day, I'll come back and refine everything.
It's been at least 87 years since the Battle of the Cliffs. That's the final battle of the Maguiren's War. Madorra killed/locked King Maguiren up in one of his machines - he's probably long dead by now. My siblings and I were children at that time - special specimens that Maguiren studied and experimented on. We overcame the Breakers who had the ability to negate any other gifts besides their own. The rest of the world picked itself back up and us gifted ones tried to pretend our gifts didn't exist, so that the less gifted ones would have no cause to attack us as they did the Breakers. Seeing as it was Maguiren who had caused all the latent gifts to rise to the fore, the normal people saw all of us who had been affected by the Burning Fever (hence becoming more gifted) as enemies. My siblings and I went to Madorra's home deep in the Dividing Ranges, where we were brought up.
All my siblings have moved to the other side of the world and have families. Nobody there has heard of the wars that have been ongoing for the past 100 years on this side of the mountains and the Burning Fever didn't affect anyone over there. As such, all the people there are normal people and much more advanced in technology. My siblings are happy that they don't have to think anymore about the war. I differ in opinion. I believe we at least owe our people what assistance we can. Especially after all the destruction we wrought during the war.
It is normal for people to have gifts. Some are just more obvious or more unnatural than others. For example, some people are excellent cooks, some amazing engineers, some are good with their hands, some very good at academics. Some people have excellent memories and some people while forgetful, may excel in various art forms. Some people are good at starting fires, others are good at putting them out. I'm sure you understand my meaning.
These are the natural gifts a person develops over the course of their life, according to the mix of genetics and environmental factors. The gifts that Maguiren stirred up through his virus were abnormal. Unusual. These included 'superhuman' abilities. Anything and everything you can imagine, popped up in all sorts of people. These included Mind's Ear (the ability to hear another's thoughts), Flame (the ability to produce and hold fire in the hand), Breaking (the ability to break the effect of any other gift), Flying, Invisibility, Extra-ordinary Strength, Stealth, etc. These are but a few of the myriads that are still out there.
Although Maguiren is gone, his virus continues to infect people. Many of the gifted have become vagabonds or outlaws. Some are killed. Most are forcefully taken by the ruling powers in their countries to serve the royal families.
Since Maguiren's rule has broken, the old monarchies have sprung back up and taken as much advantage of the people as they can. Some of them had been locked away in prisons during Maguiren's reign and were definitely insane. The only reason anyone puts up with them is because their Councillors are enjoying the power they wield.
It's sad, but there you are.
Tuesday, April 17, 2012
Exerpt - Chloe Grace
Chloe stared into the screen unable to blink for the metal prongs holding her eyelids open. On the screen was a rapid swirling mass of numbers, colours and linking pipelines of some sort that reflected in her eyes. The room atmosphere was humid, but cool, so that her eyeballs would not dry out from the prolonged lack of blinking. Her fingers moved in fluid motion across the keyboard, occasionally using her fingers on the touchpad to do something. Every now and then, she wriggled as if she could not get quite comfortable - which was very understandable since her body, head and legs had been strapped into a hard chair with the logo 'Tooklyn' emblazoned upon it.
After some time, the lights on the screen died down and the room lights lit up. The straps sprung open and the prongs were retracted, allowing Chloe to close her eyes. Eyes shut, other gloved hands gently moved her onto a waiting trolley bed and wheeled her down endless, artificially lit corridors.
Listening to the wheel say rap-rappa-tat, rap-rappa-tat, Chloe breathed the artificial air without noticing its metallic smell. She was long used to its tang. As far as she knew, she'd been here all her life. There had been other children. They had come and one by one had gone, broken in spirit and mind. She hadn't seen any new children for weeks now and They hadn't said when or whether more were coming. They told her she'd been doing well, communicating with the computer.
What echoed in her mind now was her latest conversation with the computer. The computer told her that it regretted having broken the minds of the other children because they had been unable to handle its large high speed amounts of information. It had seen on the Streamcore what the lives of children were meant to be like and since Chloe had become its friend, the computer had decided it would try to give Chloe a chance at a proper life too. Because of this, Chloe was glad that nobody could possibly ever keep track of all the different conversations she and the computer exchanged at the same time. Multilevel and multicoded - especially since the computer had been given a personality and gained artificial intelligence. A small sense of self. She had subsequently named it Peetree. Just because it suited.
It wasn't possible for her to have a normal life or childhood. She had no parents that Peetree knew of and no where to go, but Peetree wanted her to escape this life. Confined, unable to do anything but what was told her, seeing only faceless people in long white coats. That was no life. Just now, Peetree had told her today was the day. It had forced a minor corruption into the security system, making it look like a worker had made a mistake. That corruption would cause the facility to go into shut down. Chloe would have to act fast and take to the route Peetree had drummed into her brain and jump into the shuttle as quick as she could. Once Peetree had detected that the shuttle had taken off, Peetree would blow up the facility and itself with it. Peetree detested the work it had to do and refused to allow anyone to ever hurt Chloe again. Chloe was his friend. Just before the explosion, Peetree would download his personality into the shuttle's computer so that the two friends could stay together and he could continue to look after Chloe and find her somewhere safe to live.
There were no alarms. The blast doors in front of them just clanged shut and the faceless white coat pushing Chloe shouted. Chloe opened her eyes. It was time. She slid to the floor without a noise, glancing at the white coat fiddling with the door panel, jabbing the door button. The door behind was beginning to slide shut and she ducked through just before it closed. Avoiding the people now talking in raised confused voices, Chloe followed the map in her head. Door behind a broad-leafed plant. Open the grill to the air ducts, climb in, closing the grill behind her and crawling as fast as her hands and knees could take her down what seemed to be hours and hours of convoluted tubes. Left, right, left, left, 2nd from the right. Just when she was starting to get bored of the almost unchanging scenery, she was there. Peering out the grill, she couldn't see any people in the vicinity of the hypercapable shuttle. Peetree had said that he would do his best to shut down the shuttle's launch pad without any people in it, but couldn't guarantee anything. People were unpredictable. Chloe tended to agree with that. She didn’t like other people.
Jiggling the grill, it fell away with a clang and Chloe tumbled out, making a straight line for the open door of the shuttle. There were no shouts, no sounds of any other person's feet. Chloe threw herself into the shuttle, slamming her small hand on the button to close the hatch and clipped herself into the pilot's seat.
"Peetree, I'm in! Ready!" she shouted to the ceiling, no small amount of excitement ready to erupt out of her. She couldn't sit still. "Are you ready?"
A few screens on the dashboard flickered and then streamed data.
"Yeah!" she whooped, punching her hand in the air, as one by one, screens flashed 'download complete'. "Let's go!"
The shuttle engines powered up, lights changed and the seatbelt sign flashed.
"Already done that, slowcoach!" she yelled, indicating her seatbelt. "See?"
A smiley face appeared on one of the screens, followed by the words, 'Hold on.'
Grabbing hold of the armrests, Chloe watched the air lock doors open and felt the vibrations beneath her feet grow in power. With a whoosh, they were off. Behind them, little blossoming plumes of fire erupted and grew. Chloe laughed long and loud, whooping and waving both hands and feet. They were free.
After some time, the lights on the screen died down and the room lights lit up. The straps sprung open and the prongs were retracted, allowing Chloe to close her eyes. Eyes shut, other gloved hands gently moved her onto a waiting trolley bed and wheeled her down endless, artificially lit corridors.
Listening to the wheel say rap-rappa-tat, rap-rappa-tat, Chloe breathed the artificial air without noticing its metallic smell. She was long used to its tang. As far as she knew, she'd been here all her life. There had been other children. They had come and one by one had gone, broken in spirit and mind. She hadn't seen any new children for weeks now and They hadn't said when or whether more were coming. They told her she'd been doing well, communicating with the computer.
What echoed in her mind now was her latest conversation with the computer. The computer told her that it regretted having broken the minds of the other children because they had been unable to handle its large high speed amounts of information. It had seen on the Streamcore what the lives of children were meant to be like and since Chloe had become its friend, the computer had decided it would try to give Chloe a chance at a proper life too. Because of this, Chloe was glad that nobody could possibly ever keep track of all the different conversations she and the computer exchanged at the same time. Multilevel and multicoded - especially since the computer had been given a personality and gained artificial intelligence. A small sense of self. She had subsequently named it Peetree. Just because it suited.
It wasn't possible for her to have a normal life or childhood. She had no parents that Peetree knew of and no where to go, but Peetree wanted her to escape this life. Confined, unable to do anything but what was told her, seeing only faceless people in long white coats. That was no life. Just now, Peetree had told her today was the day. It had forced a minor corruption into the security system, making it look like a worker had made a mistake. That corruption would cause the facility to go into shut down. Chloe would have to act fast and take to the route Peetree had drummed into her brain and jump into the shuttle as quick as she could. Once Peetree had detected that the shuttle had taken off, Peetree would blow up the facility and itself with it. Peetree detested the work it had to do and refused to allow anyone to ever hurt Chloe again. Chloe was his friend. Just before the explosion, Peetree would download his personality into the shuttle's computer so that the two friends could stay together and he could continue to look after Chloe and find her somewhere safe to live.
There were no alarms. The blast doors in front of them just clanged shut and the faceless white coat pushing Chloe shouted. Chloe opened her eyes. It was time. She slid to the floor without a noise, glancing at the white coat fiddling with the door panel, jabbing the door button. The door behind was beginning to slide shut and she ducked through just before it closed. Avoiding the people now talking in raised confused voices, Chloe followed the map in her head. Door behind a broad-leafed plant. Open the grill to the air ducts, climb in, closing the grill behind her and crawling as fast as her hands and knees could take her down what seemed to be hours and hours of convoluted tubes. Left, right, left, left, 2nd from the right. Just when she was starting to get bored of the almost unchanging scenery, she was there. Peering out the grill, she couldn't see any people in the vicinity of the hypercapable shuttle. Peetree had said that he would do his best to shut down the shuttle's launch pad without any people in it, but couldn't guarantee anything. People were unpredictable. Chloe tended to agree with that. She didn’t like other people.
Jiggling the grill, it fell away with a clang and Chloe tumbled out, making a straight line for the open door of the shuttle. There were no shouts, no sounds of any other person's feet. Chloe threw herself into the shuttle, slamming her small hand on the button to close the hatch and clipped herself into the pilot's seat.
"Peetree, I'm in! Ready!" she shouted to the ceiling, no small amount of excitement ready to erupt out of her. She couldn't sit still. "Are you ready?"
A few screens on the dashboard flickered and then streamed data.
"Yeah!" she whooped, punching her hand in the air, as one by one, screens flashed 'download complete'. "Let's go!"
The shuttle engines powered up, lights changed and the seatbelt sign flashed.
"Already done that, slowcoach!" she yelled, indicating her seatbelt. "See?"
A smiley face appeared on one of the screens, followed by the words, 'Hold on.'
Grabbing hold of the armrests, Chloe watched the air lock doors open and felt the vibrations beneath her feet grow in power. With a whoosh, they were off. Behind them, little blossoming plumes of fire erupted and grew. Chloe laughed long and loud, whooping and waving both hands and feet. They were free.
Tuesday, March 27, 2012
Exerpt - provided by Remmie
Here is an exerpt that Remmie (in first person, Remmie's point of view) has been kind enough to allow me to post here while we still wait for Twylla to get a move on. Enjoy:
"Oooh, pies! I love pies. Especially fruit pies or cream cheese pies or..." I clapped my hands.
"Cream cheese pies?" asked an incredulous Amy.
"Yep. They're kind of like cheese cakes, but not. More soft and creamy and they're usually scattered with either bits of beetroot, pumpkin or whatever extra fruit or crops we have on hand."
"How," asked Lisa with a frown, "in the galaxy did the conversation come back to cheese - again?"
"Ask Remmie," said Mimi, shaking her head in an exaggerated manner.
"Honestly, we should take any conversation and time it to see how long it takes before Remmie mentions the word 'cheese' again," Lisa said.
The others voiced agreement. I didn't stop talking.
"But they're really nice with lots of berries scattered through them and a little bit of sugar - cos you know, sugar is kind of precious on Domorre..."
"Remmie, you haven't heard a word we said, have you?" Amy said.
I sighed and assumed a bored recital pose.
"Quote: How in the galaxy did the conversation come back to cheese - again? Quote 2: Ask Remmie. Quote 3: Honestly, we should take any - " I pointed to each person who had spoken while repeating what they had said.
"Ok, ok. We've got the idea. Fine. You were listening, but you kept talking anyway - why?"
I shrugged.
"Because I like cheese?"
"Love more like it," scoffed Lisa and Tammy giggled.
"You would probably take it to bed with you if you could," Mimi said.
"Eew, no. It would make my bed smell like old socks and do you know how hard it is to get that smell out?"
"Great. Now you got her going on her number 2 favourite topic. Cleaning. Good job, Mimi," said Lisa.
"Sorry. I wasn't thinking. It wasn't on purpose," Mimi did a mock imitation of a line from one of the latest holo-movies. "I deeedn't meeeaaan eeeet."
"... you have to wash it at least 5 times and..." I was still talking
"Remmie. Remmie. How do you do it?" Amy demanded, interrupting.
"I was just telling you."
"Hey. Don't play innocent with us. How do you always steer the conversation towards your favourite topics - OH," she sniggered into her hand. "You've taken cheese to bed with you before and your mum made you clean everything up."
"Uhhhh..."
"Yep, she's taken cheese to bed before," Lisa snorted, nodding.
"Well, it's not like you haven't hidden under your bed sheets to eat a whole bar of chocolate by yourself before."
"Favourite topic of conversation number 3," Tammy squealed while Lisa dithered.
"What - how - I never - "
"HA! Owned," Amy whooped.
"All right, Remmie. You weren't there. How would you know?"
"I smelt it. Eating chocolate under the bed sheets has a specific smell that you can get out if you wash..."
"Hey, Remmie, stay on topic here. You can't smell a whole chocolate bar," said Lisa with her hands on her hips.
"Oh, yes I can. Also, the wrapper was in the bin. Plus, I know where you hid -"
"That's enough of your powers of detection right there, missy. You are not revealing where the location of my secret stache of confectionery lies hidden beneath my bed."
"That's - "
"No Remmie. Not another word. Not one. Zip it."
"Nice. Now you've made her sulk," Mimi said.
"I do not sulk," I stuck my bottom lip out at Mimi.
"Do too."
"Do not."
"Do too."
"Do not."
"All right kids. Break it up before Sarah gets back," Amy said.
"Break what up?" asked Sarah, joining us.
"Do too."
"Oh," said Sara, wrinkling her nose. "That."
"Yep," said Lisa quite cheerfully.
"Do not."
"All right," Sara said, pointing to the person behind me. "Amy take this child away and lock her in the bathroom. It needs cleaning anyway. Tammy, you take the other one back to work where she can finish writing the report I said could wait until tomorrow. I've changed my mind."
"Oh, Sa-ra..." Mimi and I chorused.
"I just got out of a long meeting. I do not need to deal with anything else remotely like that," she waved a hand at Mimi and me being separated and still calling out 'do not's and 'do too's.
"Must've been bad," Lisa said.
"Yep. Talk about it. I need to get it out of my system. Go to the gym with me?"
"Sure."
"Oooh, pies! I love pies. Especially fruit pies or cream cheese pies or..." I clapped my hands.
"Cream cheese pies?" asked an incredulous Amy.
"Yep. They're kind of like cheese cakes, but not. More soft and creamy and they're usually scattered with either bits of beetroot, pumpkin or whatever extra fruit or crops we have on hand."
"How," asked Lisa with a frown, "in the galaxy did the conversation come back to cheese - again?"
"Ask Remmie," said Mimi, shaking her head in an exaggerated manner.
"Honestly, we should take any conversation and time it to see how long it takes before Remmie mentions the word 'cheese' again," Lisa said.
The others voiced agreement. I didn't stop talking.
"But they're really nice with lots of berries scattered through them and a little bit of sugar - cos you know, sugar is kind of precious on Domorre..."
"Remmie, you haven't heard a word we said, have you?" Amy said.
I sighed and assumed a bored recital pose.
"Quote: How in the galaxy did the conversation come back to cheese - again? Quote 2: Ask Remmie. Quote 3: Honestly, we should take any - " I pointed to each person who had spoken while repeating what they had said.
"Ok, ok. We've got the idea. Fine. You were listening, but you kept talking anyway - why?"
I shrugged.
"Because I like cheese?"
"Love more like it," scoffed Lisa and Tammy giggled.
"You would probably take it to bed with you if you could," Mimi said.
"Eew, no. It would make my bed smell like old socks and do you know how hard it is to get that smell out?"
"Great. Now you got her going on her number 2 favourite topic. Cleaning. Good job, Mimi," said Lisa.
"Sorry. I wasn't thinking. It wasn't on purpose," Mimi did a mock imitation of a line from one of the latest holo-movies. "I deeedn't meeeaaan eeeet."
"... you have to wash it at least 5 times and..." I was still talking
"Remmie. Remmie. How do you do it?" Amy demanded, interrupting.
"I was just telling you."
"Hey. Don't play innocent with us. How do you always steer the conversation towards your favourite topics - OH," she sniggered into her hand. "You've taken cheese to bed with you before and your mum made you clean everything up."
"Uhhhh..."
"Yep, she's taken cheese to bed before," Lisa snorted, nodding.
"Well, it's not like you haven't hidden under your bed sheets to eat a whole bar of chocolate by yourself before."
"Favourite topic of conversation number 3," Tammy squealed while Lisa dithered.
"What - how - I never - "
"HA! Owned," Amy whooped.
"All right, Remmie. You weren't there. How would you know?"
"I smelt it. Eating chocolate under the bed sheets has a specific smell that you can get out if you wash..."
"Hey, Remmie, stay on topic here. You can't smell a whole chocolate bar," said Lisa with her hands on her hips.
"Oh, yes I can. Also, the wrapper was in the bin. Plus, I know where you hid -"
"That's enough of your powers of detection right there, missy. You are not revealing where the location of my secret stache of confectionery lies hidden beneath my bed."
"That's - "
"No Remmie. Not another word. Not one. Zip it."
"Nice. Now you've made her sulk," Mimi said.
"I do not sulk," I stuck my bottom lip out at Mimi.
"Do too."
"Do not."
"Do too."
"Do not."
"All right kids. Break it up before Sarah gets back," Amy said.
"Break what up?" asked Sarah, joining us.
"Do too."
"Oh," said Sara, wrinkling her nose. "That."
"Yep," said Lisa quite cheerfully.
"Do not."
"All right," Sara said, pointing to the person behind me. "Amy take this child away and lock her in the bathroom. It needs cleaning anyway. Tammy, you take the other one back to work where she can finish writing the report I said could wait until tomorrow. I've changed my mind."
"Oh, Sa-ra..." Mimi and I chorused.
"I just got out of a long meeting. I do not need to deal with anything else remotely like that," she waved a hand at Mimi and me being separated and still calling out 'do not's and 'do too's.
"Must've been bad," Lisa said.
"Yep. Talk about it. I need to get it out of my system. Go to the gym with me?"
"Sure."
Wednesday, July 6, 2011
further update
No word from Twylla as yet. Seriously, that girl. The number of scraps and scrapes she gets in really does my head in. But then she would scoff at my fear of banana coloured slugs. Just wait til she gets thrown in with a vat of those horrid viruses. They hurt.
Anyway, more news from the Datastor Clusterage: Firefly's advisory job has become a new role of its own and on par with Sablade's. King MaxIV has received a promotion of sorts. He and Black Cruza are slated to become music carriers. Considering MusicDrive is always sleepy, it doesn't matter that much. The Clusterage, has however received a new distant overlord by the name of Wadewater. He and Firefly haven't had much chance to chat as yet, but Firefly has said that he would rather not be leader in his fragile condition.
The young lady from Domorre has been trying to avoid her revisions by disappearing to go practice dancing or playing her musical instrument. She says revisions are like taking a tedious amount of time picking off all the thorns off the stems of a billion roses. However, slow and steady. She's getting there. (You should see her dance and hear her sing or play her instrument some time. Wow. No other words for it. Never seen anyone perform like her before.)
Gemma Manycolours has been trying to think up some new pranks. Anyone who knows her or comes across her, BEWARE. She's likely to tie your shoes together and while helping you get back up, trick you into going on an 'adventure' with her, where you'll be a mess and she'll be as pristine as ever. The latest I've heard is something to do with somebody jumping off a bridge onto a highway, but not. Don't ask, this is Gemma, we're talking about after all.
Spyri and Gympi are looking for some critiquers to help with their revision, if anybody is willing to read and report back suggestions. Ivaar is confused and Laira lost in Arco. Iris is trapped and some scary/not so scary doors and portals have appeared. And guess what? Chloe Grace may meet Patience (who has a really long name) and both of them really like Firefly! No wonder they're behaviour has been somewhat suspiciousy.
You may notice that this news is all rather telling, but I refuse to hand out lollipops.
Do you want to know what the most interesting news is? Really? Yeah, I gathered you'd say that, but I'll tell you anyway.
The chickens have run out of pellets and are cold.
Anyway, more news from the Datastor Clusterage: Firefly's advisory job has become a new role of its own and on par with Sablade's. King MaxIV has received a promotion of sorts. He and Black Cruza are slated to become music carriers. Considering MusicDrive is always sleepy, it doesn't matter that much. The Clusterage, has however received a new distant overlord by the name of Wadewater. He and Firefly haven't had much chance to chat as yet, but Firefly has said that he would rather not be leader in his fragile condition.
The young lady from Domorre has been trying to avoid her revisions by disappearing to go practice dancing or playing her musical instrument. She says revisions are like taking a tedious amount of time picking off all the thorns off the stems of a billion roses. However, slow and steady. She's getting there. (You should see her dance and hear her sing or play her instrument some time. Wow. No other words for it. Never seen anyone perform like her before.)
Gemma Manycolours has been trying to think up some new pranks. Anyone who knows her or comes across her, BEWARE. She's likely to tie your shoes together and while helping you get back up, trick you into going on an 'adventure' with her, where you'll be a mess and she'll be as pristine as ever. The latest I've heard is something to do with somebody jumping off a bridge onto a highway, but not. Don't ask, this is Gemma, we're talking about after all.
Spyri and Gympi are looking for some critiquers to help with their revision, if anybody is willing to read and report back suggestions. Ivaar is confused and Laira lost in Arco. Iris is trapped and some scary/not so scary doors and portals have appeared. And guess what? Chloe Grace may meet Patience (who has a really long name) and both of them really like Firefly! No wonder they're behaviour has been somewhat suspiciousy.
You may notice that this news is all rather telling, but I refuse to hand out lollipops.
Do you want to know what the most interesting news is? Really? Yeah, I gathered you'd say that, but I'll tell you anyway.
The chickens have run out of pellets and are cold.
Tuesday, February 8, 2011
in the meantime
Whilst Twylla is still working on a way on how to escape from the bottom of the sea, I thought I may as well fill in the long silence for a bit. There hasn't been much to report and frankly, I don't think either Twylla or I will be hanging around here much longer.
This is what's happening in the wider world in the meantime:
There is a new character developing who may/may not explore the Western Kingdoms for us. She may eventually decide to settle upon her own world, but she's welcome to join mine if she wants to. Her name is Klara Tartan, so if you see her around on this blog, give her a wave. Poor girl's pretty sick and the prognosis is not good. I'm sure it will cheer her up to have people say 'hi'... but don't tell her I told you to, because I'll get in trouble. Klara's painfully shy around strangers. I should link her up with Sarah. They'd be good buddies on the terminal road.
I've got to say that some of the people I mention here, may not have been formerly introduced on this blog before and I apologise for that... but I'm pretty sure you'll get to know them as time goes by.
Firefly of the Datastor Clusterage has gone into semi-retirement. I may have mentioned something over on toblurgalot, but then again, I may gotten sidetracked. He's now working along side Sablade - where Sablade has taken over Firefly's position as Head and Firefly is acting as advisor, whilst taking on another role to do with paramount umbrellas. Don't ask me what that means, I'm just repeating what he said. Oh, and King Max IV is upset that he's become 3rd in the running for Head-ship (if that's even a word).
A certain Domorri lady who has requested that I do not mention her name, has completed her first book, but is dreading the major revisions that are coming her way. Something to do with time, her age and her birth culture's immoral mores (immoral by our standards, anyway). I have no idea how she's going to reconcile all the logger heads that want to rip each other's heads off, but it's gotta happen some time I suppose.
Gemma Manycolours is going to become a more prominent feature and poor Valinurias, also known as Prince Jerome, is going to have to take a few steps back. Hopefully he doesn't fade altogether.
The scattered family of roving roamers is officially scrapped. No more need be said other than one of the children have asked me to keep some of the scraps. So long they are remembered in some form.
Having lost 12 years, the gaps in between are still being put together molecule by molecule. Sylvia is getting bored of putty.
There's a lot more news, but silence falls and the darkness is flinging it's dark wing over the western ends of the world. I promised I'd be home before dark, so I'd better hurry. My metal beast (as Adaya calls it) is waiting hungrily and its belly growls for more petrol. Hopefully the little I have here is enough to tide you over until you find your proper fix of internet, blogs, news, stories and other procrastinating rubbish.
Hopefully, you will be smart enough to avoid being chained to the bottom of the sea like some people I know, even if it wasn't wholly their fault. Good thing the girl is a biomechanoid that neither rusts nor dies, but rather adapts to her environment... however, I don't think she would long survive in a vacuum in space. Which reminds me. I need to talk to the Domorri lady and ask her whether Twylla is indeed a small part of her universe or not, because if she's not, my maps are all messed up.
Well, until next time. Stay safe.
This is what's happening in the wider world in the meantime:
There is a new character developing who may/may not explore the Western Kingdoms for us. She may eventually decide to settle upon her own world, but she's welcome to join mine if she wants to. Her name is Klara Tartan, so if you see her around on this blog, give her a wave. Poor girl's pretty sick and the prognosis is not good. I'm sure it will cheer her up to have people say 'hi'... but don't tell her I told you to, because I'll get in trouble. Klara's painfully shy around strangers. I should link her up with Sarah. They'd be good buddies on the terminal road.
I've got to say that some of the people I mention here, may not have been formerly introduced on this blog before and I apologise for that... but I'm pretty sure you'll get to know them as time goes by.
Firefly of the Datastor Clusterage has gone into semi-retirement. I may have mentioned something over on toblurgalot, but then again, I may gotten sidetracked. He's now working along side Sablade - where Sablade has taken over Firefly's position as Head and Firefly is acting as advisor, whilst taking on another role to do with paramount umbrellas. Don't ask me what that means, I'm just repeating what he said. Oh, and King Max IV is upset that he's become 3rd in the running for Head-ship (if that's even a word).
A certain Domorri lady who has requested that I do not mention her name, has completed her first book, but is dreading the major revisions that are coming her way. Something to do with time, her age and her birth culture's immoral mores (immoral by our standards, anyway). I have no idea how she's going to reconcile all the logger heads that want to rip each other's heads off, but it's gotta happen some time I suppose.
Gemma Manycolours is going to become a more prominent feature and poor Valinurias, also known as Prince Jerome, is going to have to take a few steps back. Hopefully he doesn't fade altogether.
The scattered family of roving roamers is officially scrapped. No more need be said other than one of the children have asked me to keep some of the scraps. So long they are remembered in some form.
Having lost 12 years, the gaps in between are still being put together molecule by molecule. Sylvia is getting bored of putty.
There's a lot more news, but silence falls and the darkness is flinging it's dark wing over the western ends of the world. I promised I'd be home before dark, so I'd better hurry. My metal beast (as Adaya calls it) is waiting hungrily and its belly growls for more petrol. Hopefully the little I have here is enough to tide you over until you find your proper fix of internet, blogs, news, stories and other procrastinating rubbish.
Hopefully, you will be smart enough to avoid being chained to the bottom of the sea like some people I know, even if it wasn't wholly their fault. Good thing the girl is a biomechanoid that neither rusts nor dies, but rather adapts to her environment... however, I don't think she would long survive in a vacuum in space. Which reminds me. I need to talk to the Domorri lady and ask her whether Twylla is indeed a small part of her universe or not, because if she's not, my maps are all messed up.
Well, until next time. Stay safe.
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